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I asked, "Can I help?" "Yeah, OK, can you pass me that can full of snake's please. Thanks." After he haf finished it, that's when I remembred why did he need the snake's tails for? "Mr Hudson, why didn'y you go jogging this morning? You usually do." "I was ill." And he done a very fake cough, even I knew it was fake. "But usually you even go out when you're ill, and through rain, snow, blizzard, anything!" "Well, I just didn't today, OK!" he snapped at me. That's when I new something terrible was going on, and I slowly turned round to go home. I was going to say something to him before I went and turned around, and saw ...
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DATE: 10.06.2026 18:58:04
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