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Jordan: (from paragraph # 7) But suddenly , the multi-colored ooze from the painting was changed to a liquid-like red. He found that he was in a pool of some sort. He got up and gasped for air. No sooner did he rub his eyes that a machine came and grabbed his neck. He stared at it. It had many tentacles and one big red eye. It drilled a hole into the back of his neck as he screamed in pain as the machine let go of him. Then he fell through a tube and into a large pool of water where he was pulled to a surfac by a robotic claw. He closed his eyes. Today was a long day.