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Yankee: "Yeah, Right, Ron" said Harry.
"But you said that you need a new girl, A.K.A YOU HAVE TO DUMP CHO!"
said Ron.
"Just like that?" said Harry.
"Just like that, Harry. "And plus it looks like you are her SLAVE if you know what I mean," Ron said.
Harry stood up,
"What's that supposed to mean?"
"Oh shut up, Harry" said Ron.
Harry didn't want to confess to Ron that he IS tagging along with Cho.
"I mean c'mon that's not a good relationship!" said Ron.
"SHH! it is 3 A.M.. I think that the boys could hear you.
also, the girls are next door,"
said Harry.
Ron paused for a second....
"Ok, Ok FINE" said Ron.
Ron made an evil grin on his face......
"Yes?" asked Harry.
"You and I will start looking for your true companion, we will even have to go over seas if were THAT desperate"
said Ron.
"As in.....North America and South America?" said Harry.
"If it takes that much" said Ron
"HEY!" said Harry.
Harry threw a pillow @ Ron,
"Hey!" Ron giggled.
Harry and Ron laughed.
"SHH!" said a voice near by.
Harry and Ron paused for a second, and looked around the room....
"Who's speaking?"
said ron.
"Fred, you little nerd-bomer" said Fred.
Harry & Ron can only see the outline of Fred's face in the moonlight.
"If your going to have a nother girlfriend, it's gonna be Hermione" said Fred.
"ARE YOU MAD?!" Ron whispered to Fred.
"Hey, I just think that she has a thing for you, Harry...." Fred smiled.
Harry rolled his eyes and smiled.
"Well, remember when you first kissed Cho, Hermione felt down and mad, remember? IT'S A SIGHN!" whispered Fred.
"I agree," said another voice.
Ron looked around,
"George?" said Ron.
"Right-o" said George.
"Alright, let's talk about this.....IN THE MORNING PLEASE?"
asked Harry softly.
"And for your information, Fred, SHE kissed me,I didn't make the first move," said Harry.
"Yeah, ok" said George.
"Alright, alright, let's talk about this in the morning...." said George.
"Agreed," said Ron and Harry
"ok" said Fred.
All of them layed down in their beds.....
"Do you think some girls heard us in the next room?" said either George or Fred.
"We are whispereing, not talking" said Ron whispering.
"Well, for your information....."
Fred said.
Fred got out of his bed.
"What are you doing?"
said Harry.....
"Telling Hermione something...." Fred said with a evil grin on his face.
Harry got out of bed and followed Fred.
Fred opened the girl's door.
"WHAT ARE YOU-" said Harry, he could not finish his sentence.
Fred went next to Hermione's bed and shouted,
"HEY HERMIONE! YOU BETTER WAKE UP AND SMELL THE BUTTERBEER BECAUSE HARRY IS IN LOVE WITH YOU!"
Fred shouted.
All of the girls woke up by his yelling.
"WHY DID YOU SAY THAT?" said Harry.
"What's going on?" asked Hermione.
Hermione turned on the light...
Hermione looked sleepy. when she looked up, she saw Fred and Harry,her eyes grew bigger
"what now?" asked Hermione.
Harry ran for a quick exit.
"ARG! HARRY!" said Fred.
The girls started whispering to one another.....
Fred looked around.....
"hehe" said fred, looking innocent.
(Back in the boy's dorm)
"He did what?" said Ron.
"He told Hermione that I loved her" whispered Harry, walking back and forth aorund the dorm.
"Fredrick, Fredrick, Fredrick, he is the best" said George nodding, smileing.
"That's my brother" he said,
George giggled.
"Let's talk about this in the morning." said Ron, looking quite red.
Fred came back to the dorm.
"Night" said Fred, looking happy.
All of them went back into their beds, without wakeing Neville, Lee Jordan and other 6th and 7th years.
Harry thought, "DO I LIKE HERMIONE?" he asked himself......
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