THE AUTHOR: please edit this some people have been writing silly stuff on your story
THE AUTHOR: uh uh uh uh aint nobody fresher than my really awesome clique clique clique clique as i look around dang do they like my clique ?oh hi mom yeah im singing in the shower again ill stop :(
THE AUTHOR: A large man slid the glass door open and suspiciously glanced around their small compartment. He looked around, but only saw Ron and Hermione. "Have you seen Harry Potter?" He asked with a deep voice. "I heard that he was in this compartement." Silence. Hermione and Ron exchanged frightened looks. "Well?" The man asked again impatiently. He looked to the left at Ron, who was nervously looking at the floor. "Uhm.a..," Ron stuttered, "well, he is...uhm..." Desperate for an escape route, he looked at Hermione, pleading for help with his eyes. Hermione immediately jumped into action with her brilliant mind. She then said, "He went to the bathroom. You just missed him." Hermione lied. The man looked annoyed, then calmly said without batting an eye, "Well then, I'll just wait for him here." He lowered to the seat beside Hermione.
THE AUTHOR: A large man slid the glass door open and suspiciously glanced around their small compartment. He looked around, but only saw Ron and Hermione. "Have you seen Harry Potter?" He asked with a deep voice. "I heard that he was in this compartement." Silence. Hermione and Ron exchanged frightened looks. "Well?" The man asked again impatiently. He looked to the left at Ron, who was nervously looking at the floor. "Uhm.a..," Ron stuttered, "well, he is...uhm..." He pleadingly looked at Hermione, pleading for help with his eyes. Hermione immediately jumped into action with her brilliant mind. She then said, "He went to the bathroom. You just missed him." Hermione lied. The man looked annoyed, the calmly said without batting an eye, "Well then, I'll just wait for him here." He lowered to the seat beside Hermione.
THE AUTHOR: A large man entered their compartment. He looked around, but only saw Ron and Hermione. "Have you seen Harry Potter?" He asked with a low voice. "I've heard he was in this compartement." Silence. Hermione and Ron exchanged frightened looks. "Well?" the man asked again, impatiently. He looked at Ron, who was nervously looking at the floor. "Uhm..." he stottered. Well, he is...uhm..." He looked at Hermione, pleading for help with his eyes. Hermione immediately jumped into action. "He went to the bathroom. You just missed him." Hermione lied. The man looked annoyed. "Well, I'll just wait for him here than." He said, wile starting to sit down.
Casipa: A large man entered their compartment. He looked around, but only saw Ron and Hermione. "Have you seen Harry Potter?" He asked with a low voice. "I've heard he was in this compartement." Silence. Hermione and Ron looked scared at each other. "Well?" the man asked again, impatiently. He looked at Ron, who was nervously looking at the floor. "Uhm..." he stottered. Well, he is...uhm..." He looked at Hermione, pleading for help with his eyes. Hermione immediately jumped into action. "He went to the bathroom. You just missed him." Hermione lied. The man looked annoyed. "Well, I'll just wait for him here than." He said, wile starting to sit down.