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danielle: There was'nt an old man who lived in a little old stupid house in a little winding street not lined with green and small green trees! The old man lived all alone in his little old green house. He did not care very much for doing his dishes everyday, he let them build up and up and up until one morning, he went into the kitchen to have his usual bowl of porridge for breakfast but there were no bowls left in the cupboard. He turned around to the sink and what did he see? A great big pile of dishes, they were stacked SO high, they nearly touched the ceiling! "Oh, no!" he cried, "I can't wash all these dishes, I'm so hungry what shall I do?

danielle: There was an old man who lived in a little old green house in a little winding street lined with humongous green, green trees! The old man lived all alone in his little old green house. He did not care very much for doing his dishes everyday, he let them build up and up and up until one morning, he went into the kitchen to have his usual bowl of porridge for breakfast but there were no bowls left in the cupboard. He turned around to the sink and what did he see? A great big pile of dishes, they were stacked SO high, they nearly touched the ceiling! "Oh, no!" he cried, "I can't wash all these dishes, I'm so hungry what shall I do?