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Kyle: Harry had just fallen asleep on the train when Hermione woke him up."Harry!Do get up.The gaurd is about to check for you.It just so happens that the Ministry of Magic thinks that you are a witness of the crime of your God father."Hermione said quickly."Oh no!What should I do?"Harry asked."Well you can start first of all for going into the secret cumpartment up there in the sealing."Ron said as he stuffed Sticky Wicky Cotton Candy Mini Stuffed balls in his mouth."Thanks Ron!"said Harry."HEY!No prob!"said Ron as he well asleep on the seat with gum wrappings and gumballs rolling off his legs."Listen if they find you than mess up your hair,take your glasses off,and hide your scar,then call yourself ugghhh...Kyle!"Hermione said."Okay but-"Just the the door slid open and Harry took his stuff and climbed to the top.