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Chelsea: "Ron?"Harry called sleepily. Ron answered grumpily from the four poster nexter to Harry's,"Wha?" I need a new girl." "what about cho?" Ron asked, who now seemed wide awake and alert. like a hunting dog who just heard the gunshot. "Well we've got work to then," Ron said.