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Alyssa S.: "Why did I come on this journey in the first place?" Harry asked himself. Snap! "Who's there?" Harry called. "Ahhhh!" Harry screamed. Rippp! Slash! Harry Potter alone in the woods, bleeding and injuered. Everything was spinng. Harry's sight went from white, red, purple, black.