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Sophia Porcara: In the freezing dark distance of Hogwarts gates intrudes Vicktor Krum from Burlargia.He pulled his old travel coat tighter to his chest and climbs to the castle. The coldness slapped his face hard but he did not hesitate.When got to the front front doors, With a pull the doors opened, the students from all of the houses drew there attention to the famous burlargian quiditch player."Welcome Mr.Krum,I expecting you,Please dont be shy sit" says Dumbledore,all of the houses began to be murmuring to each other."Students,Faq, and of course teachers,I would like to introduce you to Mr.Vicktor Krum,He has come to Hogwarts to assist the teachers as practice of becoming a teacher and teach here at hogwarts"Dumbledore continued."I am starving,my stomach has been rumbling since we got here."said Ron."An addition to that Vicky is here"he continues."Shut up Ron, you are so inmature for your age,your 16,"replied hermione coldly "Your still in contact with that bozo!"argued Ron."What are you going to do if I am?!!!".Dumbledore continued his speech about Vickor until he finally said "We will not have our stomachs rumbling,let the feast begin!" "Finally!" Ron said at last before finishing eating.After the feast they went up to the gryffindor tower and throught the portrait hole,Into Hermione's surprise she saw him sitting one of the squishy chairs reading a book, "Hello Her..mio..nee he jumped up from the squishy chairs and he had his arms stretched out his arms for hug hermione jumped on to him and he gave her a kiss on the lips and then he started to stroke her tounge and her started growling hungerly but he stopped.Everyone was staring at them astonished .Rons mouth was wide open for 5sec then he stormed off angirly.